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Once upon a time there was a wise wizard named Dumbledor. He found a great, young and brainy wizard named Harry Potter. Harry was friends with Ron Wesley and Hamione Granger. They were very best friends until a mean boy called Draco Malifoy ruined their friendship. Boy, Harry was mad (and even Hamione and Ron)!. So Hamione sneaked up on Draco and punched him. He was scared to death!
“HAHAHA!!!!” laughed Harry, Ron and Hamione.
“That was a brilliant punched ”said Harry.
“Well it took a lot of practise” laughed Hamione.
“Arrghh, we have potion class with Professor Snape!
“Don’t worry just make him get impressed with you” went Ron
“Good idea, but HOW!” yelled Harry.
“Easy, just behave yourself like you normally do.
So Ron and Harry had to go otherwise it’s detention for them. Later on, Draco went wondering around Hogwarts and found a vanishing cabinet that can make anything disappear then makes the object that he vanish come back. He thought that it was AWESOME!!!!.
“ I wonder if I can get the death takers to hogwarts”
But, Harry saw that Draco was up to no good.
“What is up to?” questioned Harry Potter.
“BOOOO!!!!!” yelled Ron and Homione
“AAAAAAAAA!!!!! you scared me” screamed Harry.
Suddenly, “Get your hands of me”
Sir… I found this student wondering around the secret room said the guard Peter.
“Malifoy… come with me” said professor snape angrily
“okay professor” smirked Draco
“why did you touch that vanish cabinet?” asked professor snape.
“I touch it because I wanted to get the death takers to the school” said Draco
“And anyway I’m the chosen one and now is my moment”
Then, BOOM! the bad guys came and kidnapped Draco for a spell and Draco was never found again.
Once upon a time there was a fish called nemo. He lived in a big sea. One day three men were fishing to get some fish for tea, But on that day the three men were fishing they caught nemo.☹ and cooked him for tea.☹ The other fish collected their guns. And drove in to town in there boat-mocars to kill and attack the three men and saved Nemo. Then they took Nemo to his Mum and Dad. The next day, The fish drove into town and said “find the people and attack and kill the people and they save Nemo”
Once upon a time there was a four eyed slime monster named Bob. Bob was very ugly. Every time some one saw him they screamed like a little girl and ran away. The only people who didn’t do that were other ugly slime monsters like himself. One day Bob was playing PlayStation with his friend who lives underwater. Bob’s friend’s name was Zog. While Zog and Bob were playing PlayStation two hungry fishermen were out on their fishing boat trying to catch some seafood for their tea. One of the men cast his line into the ocean. The line bounced into Zog’s open window and hooked onto one of Bob’s eye-stalks. Bob was lifted up, out of the water and onto the fishing boat. But when the fishermen saw Bob they said ”Hey! this isn’t sea food” so one of the fishermen got out his field guide and he said ”it says that this is a slime monster, it also says that whenever you see one you have to scream like a little girl and run away” but where were they going to run to on a fishing boat? So they picked it up and threw it as far as possible and they drove away so fast that they started a tsunami. Meanwhile Zog was collecting his squid launchers, pharana guns and his all-terrain vehicle ready for his battle. He was also calling his friends and asking them to help. Only eight of them accepted helping zog on his extremely dangerous mission of saving Bob. While Zog was driving after the two men he saw a big splash, so he aborted his old mission and travelled to investigate. On the way zog was hungry, so he stopped at MC Donald's to get a chicken chomp combo. After he had finished he had a huge brain freeze and he was like kwlaaahhh and he accidently kicked someone in the face. Zog was kicked out of MC Donald's, so he continued his journey. When zog was at the location of the splash he found Bob, but he was as flat as a piece of paper, so zog picked bob up and smacked him head first on a rock. Soon they swam back to zog's house and they played midnight racer on the xbox.
cool as story blair love it so much......
all about nemo the fish.....
H2O
Once upon a time there lived three girls. Their names were Emma, Ricky and Cleo. They were all best friends and mermaids with powers.
Each girl had different powers too but they only had one type. Emma could freeze stuff or make it cold. Ricky could make stuff become hot or burst into flames and Cleo could make stuff or water rise.
They also each had necklaces that they found in the deep blue sea. The girls had special powers that meant they would turn into mermaids ten seconds after touching water! The place where they turned into mermaids was called Mako Island.
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